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Green = corrected text.
Page 4
Wrong:
"The Start Menu Fixer"
Right:
"The Start Menu and Desktop tool"
Wrong:
"The History/MRU Cleaner"
Right:
"The History Cleaner"
Page 14
Wrong:
"Remove translations removes all jv16 PowerTools' translation files except the one which is currently in use. The translation files are stored in \jv16 PowerTools\Languages\"
Right:
"Delete translations deletes all jv16 PowerTools' translation files except the one which is currently in use. The translation files are stored in \jv16 PowerTools\Languages\"
Wrong:
"Remove old snapshots removes all Registry Monitor snapshots which are older than 5 months"
Right:
"Delete old snapshots deletes all Registry Monitor snapshots which are older than 5 months"
Wrong:
"Remove old backups removes all backups which are older than 5 months"
Right:
"Delete old backups deletes all backups which are older than 5 months"
Wrong:
"Remove temp files removes all temporary files created by jv16 PowerTools 2008"
Right:
"Delete temp files deletes all temporary files created by jv16 PowerTools 2008"
Page 19
Wrong:
"Registry Manager > Starting programs downloads information about the applications automatically starting with your system. The feature must send the filename in order to get its information"
Right:
"Startup Manager downloads information about the applications automatically starting with your system. The feature must send the filename in order to get its information"
Page 28
Wrong:
"3. Click Search registry keys. After the search is done you should always examine the list of registry keys through before doing anything"
Right:
"3. Click Find registry keys... After the search is done you should always examine the list of registry keys through before doing anything"
Wrong:
"4. Click the Remove button which is located to the right of the Installation path text box. The button is only enabled if the text box contains a valid path"
Right:
"4. Click the Delete button which is located to the right of the Installation path text box. The button is only enabled if the text box contains a valid path"
Page 31
Wrong:
"The Add/Remove menu feature shows the items from Add/Remove Programs in the Windows Control Panel. The feature also lists the hidden items which are normally not visible in Add/Remove Programs. Notice that the Remove button only removes the software from this list and not uninstalls it, while the Uninstall button actually does uninstalls it"
Right:
"The Add/Remove menu feature shows the items from Add/Remove Programs in the Windows Control Panel. The feature also lists the hidden items which are normally not visible in Add/Remove Programs. Notice that the Delete button only removes the software from this list and not uninstalls it, while the Uninstall button actually does uninstalls it"
Wrong:
"File Types shows you all the registered file types. For example that .txt files are text files and so on"
Right:
"Filetypes shows you all the registered file types. For example that .txt files are text files and so on"
Page 32
Wrong:
"The Open With... Menu feature shows you the list of programs Windows shows in a list when executing a file with an unknown file type"
Right:
"The Open With menu feature shows you the list of programs Windows shows in a list when executing a file with an unknown file type"
Wrong:
"The Search with Menu feature shows the list of items in the Search function of the Start Menu. You can remove all items you don't need"
Right:
"The Search menu feature shows the list of items in the Search function of the Start Menu. You can remove all items you don't need"
Page 34
Wrong:
"Fully automatic mode (NOT RECOMMENDED) means that the program automatically removes all the found items without asking you. Using this method is not recommended"
Right:
"Automatically remove all found erroneous data (NOT RECOMMENDED) means that the program automatically removes all the found items without asking you. Using this method is not recommended"
Page 36
Wrong:
"1. Remove the found errors"
Right:
"1. Delete the found errors"
Page 42
Wrong:
"At this stage, please go through the list and verify that all the items in it are items you wish to modify. If you wish to remove items from the list, i.e., you do not want them to be modified in any way, simply right click the item and select Remove from the list"
Right:
"At this stage, please go through the list and verify that all the items in it are items you wish to modify. If you wish to remove items from the list, i.e., you do not want them to be modified in any way, simply right click the item and select Delete from the list"
Page 45
Wrong:
"You can use the results window to either remove the added items with the Remove button or change any modified items back to the way they were in an earlier snapshot"
Right:
"You can use the results window to either delete the added items with the Delete button or change any modified items back to the way they were in an earlier snapshot"
Page 50
Wrong:
"Fully automatic mode option allows the File Cleaner to automatically remove all the found files. Using this feature is not recommend"
Right:
"Automatically remove all found files (NOT RECOMMENDED) option allows the File Cleaner to automatically remove all the found files. Using this feature is not recommend"
Page 58
Wrong:
"Find & Replace allows you to search for data inside files and replace it with other data. The feature works in a similar way as the Registry Find & Replace"
Right:
"Find and replace allows you to search for data inside files and replace it with other data. The feature works in a similar way as the Registry Find & Replace"
Wrong:
"Remove from list removes the selected files from the File Tool, the files are not removed from the hard disk"
Right:
"Delete from list deletes the selected files from the File Tool, the files are not removed from the hard disk"
Page 59
Wrong:
"Find & Replace"
Right:
"Find and replace"
Wrong:
"Remove from list"
Right:
"Delete from list"
Page 70
Wrong:
"Remove from list only removes the directories from the list, but no data is removed from the hard drive"
Right:
"Delete from list only deletes the directories from the list, but no data is removed from the hard drive"
Page 72
Wrong:
"The Start Menu Fixer
The Windows Start menu and the desktop can easily become filled with broken shortcuts: some applications don't remove their shortcuts during uninstallation, some shortcuts may break down after moving applications from one directory to another, and so on. All this can be fixed with just a few mouse clicks using the Start Menu Fixer"
Right:
"The Start Menu and Desktop tool
The Windows Start menu and the desktop can easily become filled with broken shortcuts: some applications don't remove their shortcuts during uninstallation, some shortcuts may break down after moving applications from one directory to another, and so on. All this can be fixed with just a few mouse clicks using the Start Menu and Desktop tool"
Wrong:
"Image 53. The Start Menu Fixer can fix broken shortcuts in a snap"
Right:
"Image 53. The Start Menu and Desktop tool can fix broken shortcuts in a snap"
Wrong:
"The Start Menu Fixer automatically analyzes all shortcuts from your Start menu and Desktop. It doesn't just remove the broken ones, it can actually repair them"
Right:
"The Start Menu and Desktop tool automatically analyzes all shortcuts from your Start menu and Desktop. It doesn't just remove the broken ones, it can actually repair them"
Page 73
Wrong:
"The History/MRU Cleaner"
Right:
"The History Cleaner"
Wrong:
"Image 54. Flushing the history and MRU data is fast and easy with the History/MRU Cleaner"
Right:
"Image 54. Flushing the history and MRU data is fast and easy with the History Cleaner"
Wrong:
"Clearing the history items and MRU (Most Recently Used) lists of third party applications is very time consuming without a good tool. The History/MRU Cleaner makes the task very easy and fast, simply select the applications whose history information you wish to clear and hit Clear"
Right:
"Clearing the history items and MRU (Most Recently Used) lists of third party applications is very time consuming without a good tool. The History Cleaner makes the task very easy and fast, simply select the applications whose history information you wish to clear and hit Clear"
Edited with the suggestions of tullik:
Wrong:
"The History/MRU Cleaner also shows you how many history items of each item are fond from in the registry and on the hard drive(s). You can right-click the item and select Show data..."
Right:
"The History Cleaner can also show you the specific items found in the registry and on the hard drive(s). Simply right-click a software line and select Show data..."
Page 80
Wrong:
"-StartMenuFixer...............Opens the Start Menu Fixer"
Right:
"-StartMenuFixer...............Opens the Start Menu and Desktop tool"
