Page 2
Wrong:
"The product versions used for writing this book is a pre-release versions, therefore the user interface and the names of the features might be slightly different from the version of jv16 PowerTools you are using."
Right:
"The product version used for writing this book is a pre-release version, therefore the user interface and the names of the features might be slightly different from the version of jv16 PowerTools you are using."
Page 6
Wrong:
"jv16 PowerTools 2008 lists only the most common features as toolbar buttons. It would also not be possible to list all features that way, simply because their are more features then there is room for toolbar buttons. Instead, right click the items on the product's various lists to see the additional features relating to the item or items selected.
Right:
"jv16 PowerTools 2008 lists only the most common features as toolbar buttons. It would also not be possible to list all features that way, simply because there are more features than there is room for toolbar buttons. Instead, right click the items on the product's various lists to see the additional features relating to the item or items selected.
Page 8
Wrong:
"To access the product's settings start jv16 PowerTools and click File > Program Settings (or hit Ctrl+S in the main window, or right click the white area of the main window) and select Settings"
Right:
"To access the settings of the application, start jv16 Powertools and click File > Program Settings, or hit Ctrl+S in the main window, or click on the "Settings" icon in that same window.
Motive: the option to right click the white area of the main window and select settings doesn't exist anymore.
Page 22
Wrong:
"Both the comment writing as the age system work with the right-click menu."
Right:
"Both the comment writing and the age system work with the right-click menu."
Indeed, the correct English syntax is "both ... and" instead of "both ... as", which doesn't exist. In the Dutch language the second part is "as" (als) in "zowel ... als", but not in the English language. Correct is also "as well as", e.g. "The comment writing as well as the age system..."
Just have a look at the following attachments.
Both...and.pngBoth...and(2).pngBoth...and(3).png
Page 31
Wrong:
"Notice that the Remove button only removes the software from this list and not uninstalls it, while the Uninstall button actually does uninstalls it. For your own safety, you can uninstall only one piece of software at a time."
Right:
"Notice that the Remove button only removes the software from this list and doesn't uninstall it, while the Uninstall button actually does uninstall it. For your own safety, you can uninstall only one piece of software at a time."
Page 35
Wrong:
"The beauty of the Scan Report feature is the Severity of the found errors and the System health indicator features."
Right:
"The beauty of the Scan Report is the Severity of the found errors feature."
Motive:
- - The System health indicator feature has dissapeared in the Scan report. Look at
- Avoid using two times the same word ("feature") in the same sentence.
Page 45
Wrong:
"2. The Comparison of the user selected snapshot with the just-created temporary snapshot.
3. The Removal of the temporary snapshot.
4. The Displaying of the detected changes."
Right:
"2. The comparison of the user selected snapshot with the just-created temporary snapshot.
3. The removal of the temporary snapshot.
4. The displaying of the detected changes."
Page 46
Wrong:
"Compacting the registry reduces the amount of both RAM as hard drive space required to store the registry of the system."
Right:
"Compacting the registry reduces the amount of both RAM and hard drive space required to store the registry of the system."
See explanation above...
Page 50
Wrong:
"Fully automatic mode option allows the File Cleaner to automatically remove all the found
files. Using this feature is not recommend."
Right:
"Fully automatic mode option allows the File Cleaner to automatically remove all the found
files. Using this feature is not recommended."
Page 60
Wrong:
"The jv16 PowerTools' Renamer is not just any Renamer tool, it's one of the most advanced on the market thanks to its unique and easy-to-use user interface."
Right:
"The Renamer of jv16 PowerTools is not just any Renamer tool, it's one of the most advanced on the market thanks to its unique and easy-to-use user interface."
Wrong:
"You can access the Mass File Renamer from the File Tool. Just drag and drop some files to
the main window jv16 PowerTools and the File Tool opens."
Right:
You can access the Mass File Renamer from the File Tool. Just drag and drop some files to
the main window of jv16 PowerTools and the File Tool opens.
Page 67
Wrong:
"jv16 PowerTools 2008 contains a very easy to use generic file analyzer, which can
analyze a the contents of a file and tell you what it thinks the file is."
Right:
"jv16 PowerTools 2008 contains a very easy to use generic file analyzer, which can
analyze the contents of a file and tell you what it thinks the file is."
Page 73
Wrong:
"The History/MRU Cleaner also shows you how many history items of each item are fond
from in the registry and on the hard drive(s)."
Right:
"The History/MRU Cleaner also shows you how many history items of each item are found
in the registry and on the hard drive(s).
Page 78
Wrong:
"When a string goes through the string analysis process it might be analyzed by many other subanalyzers, which, again, increase the Values Analyzed number."
Right:
"When a string goes through the string analysis process it might be analyzed by many other subanalyzers, which, again, increases the Values Analyzed number."
I hope jv16 or Veera will fix those errors and put the adapted version on the website and include it in the next version of the PowerTools.
I myself have already adapted my Dutch translation which can be downloaded from the usual place on this forum.
